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Moon Danceby ~TwilightTheEevee

Digital Art / Drawings / Fantasy

<- *sucks at title*
ok I wanted to draw Chrissie in a more anime/fantasy style. Then I thought that i have drawn Chrissie a bit much lately and nothing else. But I liked the sketch so i decided to put Hallow in it too =3 and teh the idea with this band came *-* I love how it turned out X33
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Critique by ~Karaikou Jan 25, 2010, 9:36:09 AM

Das bild gibt einem ein sicheres Gefühl, jedoch so ähnlich, als wäre man im Höhenrausch, was wahrscheinlich von dem BG kommt

. Es erinnert mich irgendwie an das DN Angel Opening (Lycris: "[...]Breite deine Flügel aus~"). Aber zurück zum Thema: Dieses Band symboliesert in meinen Augen die Verbundenheit zwischen Hallow und Chrissie und wenn ich das richtig auf meinem Bildschirm sehe, ändert das Band mit der Zeit seine Farbe von hellbeige zu rosig zu blau und wiederum zu einem leichten grün :3. Das gibt dem ganzen einen tollen Effekt, es wirkt wie ein Polarlicht (oder wie nennt man das?). Der Schatten von Hallow (?) im BG macht das Bild für den Betrachter nur noch interessanter, genauso wie die vielen kleinen Sterne x3. Was mir missfällt ist, dass die Sterne durchschimmern be Hallows Schweif, wenn dann hätte ich Hallow nämlich überall etwas transparent gemacht :>. Was mir so auffällt; Hallow hat ja einen Flügel, aber wo ist der andere Flügel? XD Bei Chrissie ist mir dann noch aufgefallen, dass die OLs von ihren CShweif etwas zitterig geworden sind ^^. Joah, sonst hab' ich nicts an dem Bild auszusetzen, die Anatomie ist fast perfekt (ich weiß, dass dieser Spruch langsam nevrt x)) und Colorierung& Shadding sin' gut abgestimmt ^_^. Gnaz besonders schön find eich aber noch, wie du die Ohren von den beiden gezeichnet hast, sie sehen wirklich super süß aus x3. Das Auge ist aber auch nicht von schlechten Eltern, ich mag den dunkeln Farbeton, der langsam in schwarz übergeht~.

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~mewxmew2 Jul 7, 2011 Student Digital Artist

that is so awesome but i have a question if u dont mind. ummm when does Chrisse turn into that do that is swiping at her?

~mynameisducky Oct 23, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

chrissie never turns into Hallow ( the thing swiping at her ) but it was because of chrissie that she was created. Hallow was at first the halloween version of chrissie, but Chrissie the human made her into a demon that was made out of chrisie's anger. :3

or something like that. ;n; i don't know the full story :3

~EeveelutionTeam Nov 26, 2010 Hobbyist Artist

is so awesome! is like legendary! AND IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love to see all your pictures

they're so cool!!!!

~glaceonnamedglacia Mar 28, 2010

super cool! you forgot chrissies mark. how do you make it all flowy and real-looking?

~bubblestheleafeon Feb 18, 2010

asome it looks great chrissie

~Ripplespirit Jan 31, 2010

Okay, let's see, unofficial critique here...

I love how the ribbon binds them together. It's like they're connected, but anything could bring them apart. I also like how the color flows so nicely into the next, it's a very pretty affect. And the bow-things that tie the ribbon are cute and original; it's a nice touch.
Hallow looks amazing, except for one thing: she looks a little fat because of the lighting and shading. It might just be my imagination, but it looks like she's eaten too much sugar. XD' Also, what's wrong with her arm? A battle? Nothing's wrong with it, I'm just curious.
Chrissie...not so much. Her face looks just a little too realistic for the overall style of the piece. I think her ears are just a little too pointy, and the tail...it just doesn't have the same effect it usually does. It just looks a little too...plain. I don't know what it is, but the balance is thrown off by her...different style. Another thing: I think you forgot her symbol. ^^'
The background and the green aura are very fitting to the picture and placement. It's very flowy, if that makes sense. Besides the ribbon, the background's my favorite. :3
Overall, the picture was very good. I still think Chrissie could've been more fitting, or everything else could've been made to fit her. But practice makes perfect, right?

(I hope it didn't sound too cruel...)

~Leafy